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I decided to post my not awesome work at here.I'd start learning gfx early December :/ Still beginner~
Oldest to newest CnC are welcome <3
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♥ 心-- {こころ} - holiday.
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You know what I think of your stuff. <3 I still like the Miku one the best though. The latest is a close second~
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![]() This one is the best for me, i would advise you to try and enhance this "Vector Style". Just change the colour of the bright yellow text. Its quite distracting. However the image placement is sound, i like the brushing. Simple and clean. Overall i'd say issues for you to work on are making your text more visible, colouring/blending and also text placement |
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Join Date: Dec 2009
Location: Aurora, a suburb of Chicago
Age: 19
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text on the red vampire sig is horrible and unreadable.
shinoubu sig is decent but bland light texture stuff is cool, me likey.
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I know..I also noticed the text are horrible and thanks <3
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No problem!
Mind if i try using your "light textures" in a tag? :3 |
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bishies hunter~
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Sure!Feel free to use it <3
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![]() To me, this is your best piece. It has an overall nice flow, while not being overly busy but while still not being a simple, or empty piece. I suggest you try to refine your style, possibly even doing multiple versions of the same piece. One other piece of advice, work on your word placement and coloring. The placement itself isn't bad in most pieces it could just use a minor tweek or two to make it go from good, to great. As for color, it seems like your choosing colors that flow well with the piece, but at the same time make the text slightly unreadable in some cases. Overall your doing well given that you haven't been at this long. If you need any help or even just a point of view on your work feel free to contact me any time.
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bishies hunter~
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![]() Bored and learning new thing to improve more my skill <3 Credit me if you use it and CnC are welcome! EDIT: ![]() ![]() with stock ![]() ![]()
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